A retelling of a classic fairy tale that takes a completely different path over the river and through the Wood...
By Aspen Hite
With the birth records in
his left hand, Dylan sprinkled a pinch of the truth powder over them and chanted
the words of the spell, “Communicio, Tellisco, Vulgedi. Then he brushed
the powder away. This was supposed to reveal only the truth of the records, but
they were still shuffling nonsense.
“Why
isn’t this working?” Ruby fiddled with her ponytail. She was tired and jittery
- too much coffee, not enough food, “Maybe we should take a break?”
“We’ll find a way, Ruby…” Dylan
said loud and clear. Inside her head.
A
light flashed in the room. It was quick, if Ruby had blinked, she would’ve
missed it. Every fiber of her body stood at attention, except her eyes, which
ricocheted around the kitchen. She stared at Dylan. Neither of them spoke.
“Did I just hear you in my head?” Ruby
heard her own voice echo inside Dylan’s head. “What’s happening?”
“A Guardian and a Huntsman have a
mental telepathic connection.” Dylan’s voice was a soft
comfort in her mind. “Looks like I really
am your Huntsman.”
“And this just happens?” Ruby
held her breath. “Even short-term cases,
like ours?”
“Not usually.”
“I see,” she
said. Carful with her thoughts, Ruby forced a smile. Surely, hers was a unique
situation. “Looks like we’re stuck
together for the time being, then.”
“Indeed.” Dylan
smiled and gave her an exaggerated bow, “My Guardian.”
But
before Ruby could chastise him for his formal tone, even in her head, her inner
vision transported her to the edge of the Wood. She glanced at the clock. “We
have company. A Wolf…no…Wolfs. Mother and son.”
“What
are they doing here?”
“You’re
guess is as good as mine,” Ruby glanced at the phone, wishing she’d had a heads
up. Her excitement to see Kellan was shrouded in worry, “that woman makes me
so nervous.”
“Me, too,” Dylan agreed. In his head.
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