A retelling of a classic fairy tale that takes a completely different path over the river and through the Wood...
Missing The Battle (part 1)?
Ruby was ready. This was
her home. With blue power orbs gathered in both of her hands, her cloak
tightened around her waist. The Lycan army stood rigid, poised to attack. Mage or
not, none of them were going down without a very serious fight.
The Wood flashed. Bolts of light and flames erupted everywhere. Then the wind roared, picking up leaves and blowing debris around, just as Ella, hairy and crazy eyed, entered the fray. She whirled around with golden sphere’s in her hands, lashing out as she saw fit. At last, she bound upon Big Bad 1. “It’s time to pay you, foolish fiend…AAAAAAHHHH!”
Swept
up in the kerfuffle, Ruby charged Big Bad 2. “The first time I hurt you is for
my Grams. The second time is for the mess you've brought my Wood.”
“Come on then,” A smirk curved on Big Bad 2's lips as her face contorted. Her teeth grew, longer and sharper, and her fingers sprouted into spikey weapons of wood. Her tall thin frame filled out, growing bark armor, and she turned into a lethal vial Gnarly Tree right before Ruby’s eyes. Her wooden teeth jutted forward, and she screeched. Swiping her spiny fingernails, she slashed at Ruby’s flesh.
The Guardian ducked but faltered. Catching herself, she flung blue spheres from her palms. They fizzled mid-air. Ruby's chest tightened.
“Tell me, that’s not all you’ve got, Ruby Hood. Otherwise, this might be too easy, Big Bad 2 closed in, “You know, I didn’t like you from the first moment I laid eyes on you and now, I’m going to enjoy killing you. How about death by splinter?” Big Bad 2 held up her wooden stake of an arm. “It’s going to feel so good to plunge this into your soft, delicate body.”
To be continued...
Great excerpt! Lovely dialogue, I enjoyed reading :)
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So glad you liked it! Thank you for stopping by. :)
DeleteLoved the imagery in this one! From the first line of blue power orbs! Great except, Aspen!! Thanks for sharing xx
ReplyDeleteLynn | https://www.lynnmumbingmejia.com
Thanks, Lynn! So glad you enjoyed it. 😊
DeleteWas it Ella attacking with the golden orbs? Sentence structure and proper use of English isn't my strong suit, so I just wanted to be sure I was reading that correctly
ReplyDeleteIt was! You're all good. Thanks so much for stopping by! ✌
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