A retelling of a classic fairy tale that takes a completely different path over the river and through the Wood...
The darkest shadows
stretched for miles. No moon. Not a spec of light anywhere. Just pitch
blackness enveloping the Wood like a worn blanket, filling every corner and
every crevice. The air was thin and cold. Sharp.
Ruby walked at the helm of a pack of Lycan, all shifted and ready to fight. Mayor Wolf, a lean, black wolf with tiny tufts of gray around his snout, and Kassandra Wolf, a
petite, light, shaggy wolf, flanked Ruby as the pack followed. Their
heads all hung low, swinging left to right, as they scanned and sniffed their
surroundings.
Taking
a deep breath, Ruby tried to feel more confident like them, but fear screamed
within her soul. Reaching under her cloak, she caressed the new labradorite
crystal that hung around her neck and willed her pulse to calm.
Alert
and aware, she listened to the wind. Noise and doubt crept into the
corners of her mind, like scurrying beetles, but she pulled her cloak tighter and
picked up her pace. They were getting closer.
Blue
power orbs tickled at the tips of her fingers, ready to be unleashed. Even though that wasn’t part of the Aarush Mage plan. Ruby had a back up
plan of her own, just in case.
The
ground shook and a wall erupted, sprouting up in front of them. Ruby stumbled
backward. The trees inched toward them, closing in. Blocking even the faintest
glimmer of seeable darkness.
A
Lycan yelped, then poof he
was gone, snatched up by one of the meanest gnarliest trees Ruby had ever seen.
Startled, she stifled a scream as a different tree came to life and gobbled up another
creature. Right in front of her. Was she next?
The
space continued to close around them. This was it, Ruby shuddered at the
thought of the trees chomping on her bones. The small group backed into one
another. Wolves growled, hackles raised, ready to go down fighting if it came
down to that. Ruby hands tingled. Would
her power orbs even make a dent?
Suddenly,
snippets of light broke through the space between the branches. The trees
squealed and withdrew several inches. Ruby took a deep breath, happy for any
reprieve. The light grew and grew, until it shone brightly.
Bringing
her hand up to block the blinding light coming at her, she couldn’t see, but she
could hear. Trees thumped, grunted, groaned, and screamed. The light
disappeared and the darkness blanketed them again, but the trees were gone. So
were the walls around them.
Ruby’s
eyes adjusted, as the Lycan pack spread out, sniffing up a storm. There sitting
in the middle of the Wood, far from its normal spot in the clearing, was Ruby’s
cabin. Broken, battered and dilapidated. Ruby opened her mouth to speak, but
the cabin belched out its windows and exploded. BOOM.
They
all stared, speechless, there was nothing left but tree limbs and broken glass.
Had the cabin just saved them?
The
mayor yipped at her as the rest of the pack filed in behind him. There was no
time to worry about the cabin. The path was clear now. Ruby fell in line
with her army and together they continued through the Wood, toward the river.
I think I missed the last snippet, because at first I thought when you said "A pack of Lycan, all shifted and ready to fight, surrounded Ruby" you meant they were going to attack Ruby. Does Mrs. Wolf have a first name?
ReplyDeleteNo it's poorly worded. I've reworked the the whole paragraph and included Mrs. Wolf's name... Kassandra. 😉
DeleteThere is a lot of great suspense and drama here, and it is easy to feel like you are walking right next to Ruby and experiencing it all. Can't wait to see what's next!
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by, Dee! Glad you enjoyed it!
DeleteHave you ever watched the TV series Once Upon a Time? Every time I see the name Ruby, I instantly think of her!! Wonderfully written love xx
ReplyDeleteLynn | https://www.lynnmumbingmejia.com
I have! Loved that show. Thank you, Lynn! ✌
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