A retelling of a classic fairy tale that takes a completely different path over the river and through the Wood...
“Rue, is that you?”
Kellan’s voice echoed in the dimly lit room.
“Hey
Kel,” was all she could utter. He looked terrible. A pale greenish hue colored
his cheeks. His slick hair stuck to his forehead. Deep grays bags hung
underneath his bloodshot eyes.
“I’m
so glad you stopped by,” He tried to smile, which ended in a coughing fit.
Ruby
was at his side, sitting on the bed with his hand in hers. The heat radiating
from him startled her. She reached for a cup of ice cubes on the nightstand
next to his bed and handed it to him. “Wow, you’re really warm?”
“Yeah,
more so than normal.” He took the cup, “Thanks, Lycans run hot normally, so when we get sick, it gets much worse. Except this isn’t sickness, it’s
a poisoning spell. One our Shaman can’t figure out how to break."
“Tell me what happened.” She reached down and rested her lips on his
forehead. A gentle vibration buzzed.
“That
felt nice, Rue,” he closed his eyes, and his mouth settled into a comfortable
curve, “I was coming back from the park; that's when heat and pain scorched my
nostrils. It was horrid and heavy
and suffocating. I couldn’t breathe. My eyes and lungs burned, but my body broke out in a sweat and then I got the chills. My knees buckled while my head pounded like a jackhammer was drilling on my skull. I thought I was going to puke. Right there. Everywhere.
“It was on campus. Somewhere,”
Kellan’s shoulders shuddered, “But I couldn’t go any further, so I turned back
to the park. That’s when Dylan showed up and brought me to the room. Then you were
there.”
“Okay,”
she said, but her mind screamed, ‘HE’S NOT OKAY,’ and the mayor and Dylan were
about to depart!
“I’m
glad you showed up, Ruby,” He choked.
“Me
too,” She gave a gentle squeeze in return and swallowed the lump in her throat.
“Ruby,”
Kassandra said from the doorway, interrupting them, “Kellan needs to go for his
treatment.”
“Rue,”
Kellan coughed, not letting go of her hand, “Will you be here when I get back?”
“I
don’t think so,” she squeezed again, “I need to follow up on a few things at
school, but I’ll stop by after lunch.” Leaning over, she gave him a kiss on the
forehead. A tiny blue light ignited as another soft vibration left her lips.
“That
tickles and feels so nice. Will you do it more later?” Kellan closed his eyes
as her kiss wash over him.
“Of course,” she said, refusing to let any tears fall. Fear gripped her. There had to be way to save him.
Wow! Love the vivid description you've included in this passage. You can really feel the character's experience through this. Keep it up!
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DeleteLove this! Such great imagery. Hope Kellan gets better! Thanks for sharing Aspen xx
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DeleteLove this story so far! I love how the picture is painting out so well with how you've told the tale x
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DeleteThis is so interesting, I went back and read the first part too! I love fairytales with a twist. Thanks for sharing!
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DeleteBring poisoned seems like a really unpleasant way to die, especially if it's dragged out. Will this be the end of his story or will you end up saving him?
ReplyDeleteHe will survive this poisoning...this time. 😉
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